Do you have some interesting memories? I have a lot. When we think about our favorite memories, we feel happy. I'm happy to write this journal because I can think my interesting memories. Today, I will talk about my favorite memories.
My first favorite memory is when I went to Hong Kong. I went to Hong Kong with my family. I took peak tram to see the Hong Kong's night view. It was beautiful and there were lots of buildings too. On the top of the buildings, there were lazers so we had a lazer show too. It was interesting. I tried chinese food but it contained too much oil so I couldn't eat all. However, It was interesting.
My second favorite memory is when I bought my laptop computer. It was almost 2million won, but I got an all 100 score in my mid-term test so I could buy it. The name of my laptop computer was LG XNOTE. It was the newest laptop and its booting speed was 9 seconds. Also it is very slim and the design was great too. I will use it until I go to university. I think it was my best memory among my memories.
My last favorite memory is when I got a all 100 in mid-term and my final exam. My mom felt very happy and I was satisfied with myself. I think I could get all 100 because I worked hard and lots of academies. By the way, I can buy something I want!!
I saw a lazer show in Hong Kong, too! It was great~
ReplyDeleteHi Alex:) I enjoyed your writing! Very interesting, indeed. Still, I want you to elaborate more. Your body paragraphs are a bit short, so try to develop more of each subject. Trying to create a nice and neat conclusion would also be great:) Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi, Alex! I'm MyeoungWoo. I think the lazer show is great
ReplyDeleteThe laptop looks cool! I want to buy it too. I like your extra assignment.
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