Thursday, August 9, 2012

Reflective Essay

Hello everyone? Today,I will talk about the video 'Spring' by Kim Ki Duk. There was one young monk and his teacher. One day, the young monk tied fish,snake,frog with string and a rock. However, the teacher saw that and he tied a rock to the young monk. The young monk was asked to find the animals but fish and snake was dead. He cried and buried them. So, what do you think that this movie wants to tell you? Now, I will talk about it.



 First, I think there are big differences between the teacher and me. The teacher loved a creature, but I think I'm do not. When I heard the monk speak, I thought that I should love creatures. Although we saw a tiny little ant, we should leave It alone. If we change the position, would you like to be stepped on by a human's foot? No, I think everyone would not like it. So, I hope everyone will love creatures.

 Second, I will give you some examples from my life. First, I spit on a frog. Now I'm reflecting on my behavior. Next, at school, we have a small lake. There are lots of frogs. I  caught them and kicked them. I have to apologize to the frogs. Sorry,frogs, I will not do that again.

 In conclusion, video 'Spring' wants to tell us that you should love creatures. I learned that we should love animals, do not tie an animal with rock. Everyone, please do not kill animals, but love them. They will make us life better. Thank you~

2 comments:

  1. It's good ot add video in your essay. But it's short little bit--

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  2. This is a good start but it needs to be 450-500 words. Try adding more examples from your life to it next time. You also should include the video.

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