First, I think there are big differences between the teacher and me. The teacher loved a creature, but I think I'm do not. When I heard the monk speak, I thought that I should love creatures. Although we saw a tiny little ant, we should leave It alone. If we change the position, would you like to be stepped on by a human's foot? No, I think everyone would not like it. So, I hope everyone will love creatures.
Second, I will give you some examples from my life. First, I spit on a frog. Now I'm reflecting on my behavior. Next, at school, we have a small lake. There are lots of frogs. I caught them and kicked them. I have to apologize to the frogs. Sorry,frogs, I will not do that again.
In conclusion, video 'Spring' wants to tell us that you should love creatures. I learned that we should love animals, do not tie an animal with rock. Everyone, please do not kill animals, but love them. They will make us life better. Thank you~
It's good ot add video in your essay. But it's short little bit--
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start but it needs to be 450-500 words. Try adding more examples from your life to it next time. You also should include the video.
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